Wednesday, 1 September 2010

haiku (senryu) my way

pretending
nothing has happened
wrinkles deepen

6 comments:

Nessa said...

Your poem is being scrutable.

Anonymous said...

In all of us I do believe. Well done :)

quilly said...

You know, those wrinkles might have deepend anyway. mine sure are!

juliana said...

nessa - life makes it so...

thom - but in some sooner than the others... thanks :)

quilly - i blame it on the time ;)

roughterrain crane said...

haha
The depth of wrinkles would show person's maturity in life.

RA said...

Now, I wish I could pretend on those wrinkles. Great haiku. Have a wonderful week :)