haiku my way

the place i called home...
getting stuck in traffic jam
driving into town

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this was a real experience from a few weeks ago. i forced it into 5-7-5 form although this is not my habit. for real use i would probably pare down this senryu (it is more senryu than haiku although the differencers can be subtle) and rephrase it - eliminate redundant stuff while still give all the necessary information - into something like this:

the place
i used to call home...
traffic jam