Wednesday, 30 June 2010

haiku my way

One from the memory... we had often travelled to our away matches by train and it would stop in the middle of nowhere for no apparent reason and wait for who knows what. I had no problems sleeping on a moving train but these pauses would inevitably wake me up.

night train
awakened by the absence
of movement

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

It's like falling asleep with the TV on. The minute it shuts off I'm wide awake. Excellent my friend. :)

juliana said...

yeah, sort of... ;)
thanks

quilly said...

I do the same thing in the car! Take me on a long trip and I sleep. Stop the car and I wake.

Nessa said...

Your haiku sure do ring true.