Thursday, 8 April 2010

3WT - Arrival

Since you asked for it, the story continues. I was hoping to finish it this time but the story refused to turn in the direction I initially wanted it to...

Pagan kept staring at the creature in disbelief. She was used to picking up stray and abandoned animals and finding them new homes or, if that didn't work, keeping them with her. However, the strangest thing she'd found thus far was a caricature of a dog with dreadlocks which, as she found out later, was a puli, a Hungarian sheep dog, and was supposed to be an acersecomic. But this... how can this be? Dragons don't exist! There must be an alternative explanation.
"Oh well, let's take you home", she sighed and lifted the sack along with its unusual content onto her pickup truck. Her home was just a few minutes' drive away; a small cottage at the edge of a chestnut grove surrounded by y neatly cultivated garden where Pagan uberated her crops. Some fowl scavenged the yard and a goat stood tethered in the middle of a meadow. Two tabby cats and a scruffy three-legged yellow dog lay on the veranda, soaking in the warm sunshine. The house was bright yellow with large windows. The sunny side of the slanted roof was covered in solar cells and the ridge sported a satellite dish.
Pagan pulled up in the driveway and shut the engine. She reached for the sack and harled it over to a shed at the back of the house. All the time the dog hopped around and yelped excitedly at the sack.
"It's alright, Nelson," Pagan tried to calm him down but the dog wouldn't stop.
"Now that's enough. Be a good boy and give me a break. Or have you forgotten about that bear cub you chased until his mother gave you a lesson? I was able to save your life if not your leg then but this could be just as dangerous."
These words seemed to calm Nelson down and he backed away but hasn't left the sack out of his sight. Pagan could finally untie the sack and drop it so she could snilch the mysterious creature properly.

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

Oh you wicked woman. You just do enough of the story to get to the house...how evil. LOL. It's so wonderful. I love it. Good use of the words :)

quilly said...

I am so glad you decided to continue -- but I am not so thrilled with where you stopped! More! More!

juliana said...

thom - i only know that much for the time being and have still no idea what happens next...

quilly - i'm sorry but this is as much as my characters decided to reveal this time. but since i have (obviously) been committed to tell their story, i'll wrap it up sooner or later :)

SouthLakesMom said...

I love the way Pagan chastises the bear-chasing dog! What a reminder that was! The dog is smart to back-off from the bag, I think.

Nessa said...

I wanted to see the dragon. I'm pouting but like the dog I am backing off and waiting for next time.

juliana said...

SLM - i think they understand each other pretty well. animals are smarter than we give them credit for :)

nessa - sorry... but i am still not sure where the story will go from here although an idea is beginning to form (i, too, had to back off first)