Scabiosa Trenta: my take on wednesday haiku

Wednesday, 3 March 2010

empty husk
hidden beneath a leaf -
pulsating wings

Anonymous said...: Brilliant my friend. I love this. You are so good at this. I haven't forgotten your links to your haikus that I asked you about earlier. I just need to find some time to look at them :); 3 March 2010 at 19:35
juliana said...: well, the links are there and will remain for your convenience (or anybody else's who cares to look for that matter). you may look at them or not, i won't be offended either way :)

one of the principal rules of haiku is show, don't tell - and although it applies to writing in general, it is particularly relevant in such a minimalistic form as haiku :); 3 March 2010 at 19:49
Together We Save said...: Great job!!; 3 March 2010 at 22:15
quilly said...: I followed all of your links the day you put them upp. You are impressive! (But I already had that figured out.)

Speaking of impressive, this is beautiful -- photo, words, and butterfly.; 4 March 2010 at 06:36
RA said...: Very beautiful image and words! Have a wonderful day :); 4 March 2010 at 13:33
Nessa said...: Gorgeous picture and the haiku is so full of life.

Sean the Vampire; 4 March 2010 at 19:49
juliana said...: TWS - thnk you

quilly - i know and appreaciate it.
i'm glad you liked this one - after months of drought i'm slowly beginning to enjoy writing haiku again...

rosidah - thank you and hope you have a great day, too

nessa - appreciate that,and i'm glad the haiku came through; 4 March 2010 at 20:01