(no, it is not 5-7-5 and yes, it is a haiku)
melting snow
a crow weaves a new twig
into his old nest
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6 comments:
They seem to constantly be doing something to their nest. But there again, if my home was made from twigs I suppose so would I. Wonderful Haiku :)
Yours are always wonderful. You could lead us in a Haiku purification crusade. I'd write them correctly, but I'd have to be taught.
thom - i suppose it's their way of trying to get laid. and i agree, it's not the worst haiku i have ever written ;)
quilly - hmmm... so i should introduce some basic haiku lessons?
will have to think about it :)
Now that is a haiku and it is wonderful.
Detour
very much appreciate that, nessa.
i have to live up to my reputation, though - after all, i am a published haiku writer
It is indeed a haiku and a lovely one at that. :) It took me right into the moment. Well done.
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