Yes, I know, most would call it haiku but in fact the following is rather a senryu as it is human-orientated (in truth, it's a rewrite of an oldie adjusted to 5-7-5 form of which I am usually not too fond)
overcrowded bus
the last seat is occupied
by a shopping bag
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3 comments:
Oh my friend, you don't know how often that happens and how nasty people are when it comes to moving them. The fight like children. Well done my friend :)
Make the shopping bag walk!
On a bus full of teens, an old man on crutches hobbled onto the bus. I was the only one who stood -- and I was wearing a leg brace. Consideration has died.
alas, complete lack of consideration seems to be a worldwide thing, and it is most transparent in traffic and public transport. it's a jungle out there!
thank you my friends!
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